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Wednesday, April 7th, 2010 06:25 pm
Meditation on the Word Need
by Linda Rodriguez

The problem with words of emotion
is how easily meaning drains
from their fiddle-sweet sounds
and they become empty instruments.
I can say love
and mean desire to give—
open-handed, open-hearted—
or I am drawn to the light
shining from your soul—
or my life is empty without you—
or I want to run my hands
and mouth down the length of you—
or all of these at once.

Need, now, is a plain word.
I need a nail to hang this picture.
I need money to pay my bills.
I need air and light,
water and food,
shelter from storm and sun and cold.
To be healthy,
to be sane,
to survive,
I need you.
Thursday, April 8th, 2010 02:58 am (UTC)
Maybe I am in a strange mood too, but that poem is really, really appealing.

I like it.
Thursday, April 8th, 2010 03:32 am (UTC)
Everyone keeps posting these long, involved poems that want all of my spoons to read them. This one is short and still manages to kick me in the gut (in a good way!) at the end.

... I have been talking way too much this week and my words do not say what I mean. I hope you can understand me anyway.